مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Not Yet
أم ورقة
01-01-2008, 09:11 PM
Time has not
come yet
Things have not
been set
so how would
goals be met?
when things
are farther
than I can get
more patience
is of no
regret
مقاوم
01-02-2008, 04:15 AM
when things
are farthest
than I get
more patience
is no regret
I did not quite get the meaning here. i
Did you mean to say : "then I get"? i
من هناك
01-02-2008, 04:55 AM
Farther than what I get
أم ورقة
01-02-2008, 09:48 AM
Things are farthest than I can reach
or can get
سـمـاح
01-02-2008, 10:18 AM
Things are farthest than I can reach
or can get
It should be farther than, not farthest.
Masha Allah, your poems are very nice. I especially like the
music in them
more patience
is no regret
I would have said :
more patience
is of no regret
No peom for today ?
مقاوم
01-02-2008, 10:26 AM
Consider this:
When things are
Beyond my reach
"More patience"
Is what I preach
أم ورقة
01-02-2008, 10:30 AM
Consider this:
When things are
Beyond my reach
"More patience"
Is what I preach
good suggestion
but I liked the sound of the "t" at the end that's why
I prefer to stick to it
as for the previous suggestions I'll take them into consideration
and make some modification
thanks Samah for sharing :)
مقاوم
01-02-2008, 10:50 AM
ok, how about:
When things are scarce
And hard to get
More patience is
of no regret